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Final page...so yeah, defiantly a weird story but I got really into it.
Thanks for reading!
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Dreamranger2 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Student General Artist
He still got the seed, so there's still hope. Like the stone that the Lorax left behind, "Unless."

So Once-ler, don't give up.
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bloodrosered Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great comic! I like how you made the seed colored!!
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:icondawn214:
dawn214 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Am I the only one who noticed that tiny green seed on the table???

This means...it's not too late!!! He can make amends for his punishment!!!
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:iconbloodrosered:
bloodrosered Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yup
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SchildpatCar Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Dang, this is a great comic/doujinshi ouo Amazing drawing and editing skills, I love how you display the plot, even if it's short. 
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:iconzevimaru:
Zevimaru Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist


.. Oh my poor Onceler...
.. I wish I could just give him all my loves. </3..
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:iconxmordecairigbyx:
XMordecaiRigbyX Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nuuu!
I got so worried!!
to bad this story isn't any longer.
now I feel so sad!!
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:iconsupaonce-lerfangirl:
supaonce-lerfangirl Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gosh when i read this i loved it soooooooooooooo much great job ;)
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:iconperrytheplatypusgirl:
I loved this comic! It was so deep and your style is just adorable! :heart:
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:iconaskoncelercat:
AskOncelercat Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
aww don't be sad *hugs* Everything is not as bad as it seems.
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:iconclairakitty:
Clairakitty Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
That was amazing. Very powerful.
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:iconyaoiobsessedfangirl:
YaoiObsessedFangirl Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Filmographer
Holy.... im... wow. im actually kinda finding it hard to think of what to say. Dont get me wrong, GREAT story and adorable style. But the whole dream sequence... thats heavy stuff man. o3o

I really dont much care to read fan comics or fanfiction about anything, especially for the Once-ler fandom. but man, when i saw those first couple pages i was just HOOKED. Way to hold an audience! o3o I was gonna comment earlier but i thought something thoughtful at the end would be nicer. XD
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no it's fine! I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconyaoiobsessedfangirl:
YaoiObsessedFangirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Filmographer
8D
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:iconlinalinos:
LinaLinos Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student General Artist
My feels T^T I'm torturing myself!
I'm listening to the valley of exodus :(
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NemuiNeko0o0 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Artist
Awww! Poor dude... Poor greedy little dude... (Though I still love how you draw him, he's so cute >//3//<... Tried to make a blushy-duck-face, if you can't tell... It didn't turn out right^^;)
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no, it's ok, I get the idea.
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:iconnemuineko0o0:
NemuiNeko0o0 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Artist
... Have you read 'Pandora Hearts'?(One of my favs!=D)
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I have, all the way to the recent chapter. I'm getting rather freaked out since they already killed a lead character so I'm sure more are now to come...;___;
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NemuiNeko0o0 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Artist
Ya' know, it'd be bad if I wasn't the type to not mind spoilers. Because I've only read up to the stuff with the Cheshire Cat^^;... Now I just want to know whether or not the person who died is Oz or Alice.
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I won't say. You'll have to figure it out on your own.
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:iconnemuineko0o0:
NemuiNeko0o0 Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Artist
Okay... That's probably best though, I'm a blabber-mouth with that kind of stuff to my sister... And she's reading that series too^^;
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Gloomy-Haruka Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012   General Artist
OH MY GOSH!!!!; 0 ;
THIS WAS SOOO WONDERFUL!!! <3
And I love the ending!:3 Very sad, I didn't expect it!xD
Great job!!!!!
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I was concerned that people wouldn't like how it ended.
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:iconuber-neko:
uber-neko Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love you 4EVER for making this comic!! :iconiloveyouplz:
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you!
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:icontheanimangagirl:
TheAnimangaGirl Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Writer
This was so cool :O
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:iconicha-chan:
Icha-chan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
This was really well made!! I really liked it =D And I like your style so much~
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you!
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:iconwickedulquiorra:
WickedUlquiorra Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
That was really cool! I liked the illustration!! You did a wonderful job :)
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks! Did you see the movie?
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:iconwickedulquiorra:
WickedUlquiorra Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
no, i havent seen the movie yet, i plan on seeing it though :)
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
SEE IT! :)
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:iconwickedulquiorra:
WickedUlquiorra Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
will do :)
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:iconhippyprincess:
hippyPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Broken dreams curupted soul nightmares haunt u
Of what this place used to b
A shadow a hollow husk
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
...0_0
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hippyPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah im a poet! deal withs it! lol jk! but yeah i is a poet i also hate grammer which is why i try and mess up whenver i can cuz 'real' words arnt funner than fake words u know?
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yea iz no wha ya means ^_^
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:iconhippyprincess:
hippyPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thx!
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:icondeixtobiallyaoi:
DeixTobiallyaoi Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student General Artist
how long did each page take?
and
THIS WAS AWESOME
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
it varied from page to page. I believe the average was 45min-1hour on each.
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:icondeixtobiallyaoi:
DeixTobiallyaoi Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student General Artist
oooh~
thanks 4 anwering my questions!
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no problem ;)
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:iconfungirl22:
Fungirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
so sad ;v;
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ι'ℓℓ ιηƒєт υ ωιтн му υтєηєѕѕ!:iconnyappyplz:
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XxPandaLover27xX Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
you are amazing
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
heh, thank you very much!
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seer0fdoom Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was.... intense....

I LOVED IT!!

But still.... very intense...
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you!
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JoceDaAmetuer Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! This was amazing. I loved this with all of my heart. And I don't usually do that. Amazing job. I can't explain to you how amazing and wonderful and beautiful I think this story and art are.
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:iconmidorilied:
MidoriLied Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you very much! it means a lot to me ^.^
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